Group : Canyon
Title : Superhero of Merpati Jepang
It start at a very peaceful and the richest country in the universe called "Merpati Jepang".the country started to become corrupt when the economy crisis hit the country.then a new hero born called "V". He has the very special motorbike that can make him easier to stop of the evildoing at his country. Not to mention he has a lovely beautiful daughter but in this story their are no mention about the daughter in the detail. The story line quiet short. No action involved. The story just tell you on the surface but not deep inside. The antagonist and protagonist just come out just like that, no background details or whatsoever. No particular or specific gangster,..just the government and evil citizen. The "v" point is to gather all the citizen that their country is in bad condition and really need their support to help him stop the corruption
Far.. Far away from Earth, there is a planet on other solar system called "Merpati Jepang", which was a peaceful and rich with their own nature sources. The citizen lived in harmony, peace and very addicted to the music. Thousand of songs, with various genres were created, recorded and played every month; proof of how madness the citizen towards music. Almost every weeks there were music events organized at a place they called Central Park. Every year they have a music festival they named it "Music Revolution".
But, the peaceful won't remain forever.
When the climax celebration the 50th years of "Music Revolution", something that far from their expectation, the president of "Merpati Jepang" make an announcement during the music festival; the economy was at critical level and unmanageable due to organizing the "Music Revolution". Because of that, the president decided that there was no more music festival will be organized by the government. The announcement evoked unsatisfied to the citizen.
Something wrong happened to the government.
An unimagined chaotic begun; the first time ever since the government was established. the people started to protest the president decision. Giant crowd making riot was everywhere around the country. When there situation came to worst, the president send out his enforcer, forcing them to captured and tortured whoever fighting against him. Now, it's time for this man, who will changed this nightmare came forward to stop the wicked president. This man known as "V".
He was a freedom fighter, who used to worked with the government. This intelligent man established a group that will fight for the right of the citizen. With the moral support and spirit he got from his daughter, "V" appeared to unite the people and trained the man who is suitable to became his comrades fighting the president army. He exposed all the truth that all the time been hide; the president was the country betrayer. He was smuggling the nation sources and sold them for his own profit.
For the country they loved, they rise.
With a brilliant and tactical strategies, they manage to eradicated the smuggling syndicates and collected lots of evidences to drag the president to the justice .With all the effort, hard worked, team worked and patient they hold for a year finally bringing them a total victory and the president had to pay for all the devilry he made. "Merpati Jepang" finally turned into what it used to be, a peaceful, harmony and music once again be played around the country.
We found the Parts of Speech which are Nouns, Pronouns, and Article in the Superhero Merpati Jepang's story.
1) NOUNS
Proper Nouns
Merpati Jepang , Superhero "V"
Command Nouns
Government, Motorbike, Country
Countable Nouns
Citizens,
Non-countable Nouns
Oil, Uranium
2) PRONOUNS
Personal
He, She, It, Them, Him
Possessive
His
3) ARTICLE
A - A hero, A time
An - An organization
The - The people, The man.
New Story Line
Far.. Far away from Earth, there is a planet on other solar system called "Merpati Jepang", which was a peaceful and rich with their own nature sources. The citizen lived in harmony, peace and very addicted to the music. Thousand of songs, with various genres were created, recorded and played every month; proof of how madness the citizen towards music. Almost every weeks there were music events organized at a place they called Central Park. Every year they have a music festival they named it "Music Revolution".
But, the peaceful won't remain forever.
When the climax celebration the 50th years of "Music Revolution", something that far from their expectation, the president of "Merpati Jepang" make an announcement during the music festival; the economy was at critical level and unmanageable due to organizing the "Music Revolution". Because of that, the president decided that there was no more music festival will be organized by the government. The announcement evoked unsatisfied to the citizen.
Something wrong happened to the government.
An unimagined chaotic begun; the first time ever since the government was established. the people started to protest the president decision. Giant crowd making riot was everywhere around the country. When there situation came to worst, the president send out his enforcer, forcing them to captured and tortured whoever fighting against him. Now, it's time for this man, who will changed this nightmare came forward to stop the wicked president. This man known as "V".
He was a freedom fighter, who used to worked with the government. This intelligent man established a group that will fight for the right of the citizen. With the moral support and spirit he got from his daughter, "V" appeared to unite the people and trained the man who is suitable to became his comrades fighting the president army. He exposed all the truth that all the time been hide; the president was the country betrayer. He was smuggling the nation sources and sold them for his own profit.
For the country they loved, they rise.
With a brilliant and tactical strategies, they manage to eradicated the smuggling syndicates and collected lots of evidences to drag the president to the justice .With all the effort, hard worked, team worked and patient they hold for a year finally bringing them a total victory and the president had to pay for all the devilry he made. "Merpati Jepang" finally turned into what it used to be, a peaceful, harmony and music once again be played around the country.
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