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Six Stripes (superhero) of Asian
Six Stripes (superhero) of Asian
Six Stripes.. is a just a name, is a legend name for those who want to save earth, to save the people's life, to make people happy in their life, to ensure that people can walk around, to protect people from bad guys, but who willing to become a superhero?
This is the answer, six young brothers, from any states in Malaysia, come to Kuala Lumpur to see each others because they are close friend since the school but they has a own strength, own character and also own power. This power come from their heart, mental and physical. They meet at Mak Ngah' stall at Taman Shamelin Perkasa. Generally, they will be chatting and wasting time in the stall but they did not know each person has a power like a superhero.
Shahrul, one of the members, from seremban, he can run fast, can walking the path of heaven, and also have a secretly "hanshin". Hazuan, the cute man, has a pocket like Doraemon, can give any items from his pocket, and can use this pocket for help the other people. Firdaus, hilarious man, is a smart and clever, he can solve the problem only 1 minute, can find the solution to settle that problem, and always thinking about women. Farhan, has a power like Power Rangers, can fight with monster alone, but this guy always arrogant about his power. yushafizi, the lone ranger from seremban that has unique power that can fly and has strange behavior. The people at earth called him "son Goku". He live in underground section 77, Shah Alam. And the last Hero is Arif we called him, the hulk. He can change behavior from good person to abnormal person. when he angry, the body can transform become a green monster and the body so biggest rather than elephant and he loves to laugh like vampire. So that, we create a superhero group called Six Stripes.
When we all hanging out at mak ngah's stall, suddenly, Black Crow, make a chaos in front of UNiKL. They are disturbing a cute lecture which is k****L A**A (the full name can not be display for secure). Black Crow make a trouble. Actually, this group from another planet, they want kidnap this lecturer because she has a secret recipe of asam pedas and masak lemak cili api. They want to sell this recipe at their planet. At that time, Black Crow have a plan to kidnap lovely lecturer so without wasting time, The Six Stripes make an action.
When we all hanging out at mak ngah's stall, suddenly, Black Crow, make a chaos in front of UNiKL. They are disturbing a cute lecture which is k****L A**A (the full name can not be display for secure). Black Crow make a trouble. Actually, this group from another planet, they want kidnap this lecturer because she has a secret recipe of asam pedas and masak lemak cili api. They want to sell this recipe at their planet. At that time, Black Crow have a plan to kidnap lovely lecturer so without wasting time, The Six Stripes make an action.
Initially, Shahrul (Kamen Rider Kabuto) can know a bad things will happened with using his availability. He run fast and quickly like a crazy horse. He want to know that situation. After that, he send an instant messaging to Firdaus .Firdaus like a Detective Conan, he can make investigation and thinking to solve this happened. After one minutes, he called Hazuan (Doraemon). Hazuan take out the goods from his pocket. He gives red sword to Farhan (Power Rangers) for beat Black Crow. Black Crow become aggressive and threatened to kill that lecturer. This gangster also have a power, they can transform to be ugly monster and can expand the bad smell to all world. So, to avoid this, the Six Stripes must be unite. the Seven Stripes has a plan to beat the black crow. Kamarul as know son Goku ability he finally find the secret place that black crow hide the lecturer. Kamarul use his power which is he can move to another place quickly and save the lecture. The other members struggle to fight with Black Crow. Black Crow become a monster. They want to kill other people. so this is Hafif's turn, he also can transfer to mutant like Hulk. So they fight each other by using all his energy.
Finally, the Black Crow give up and continue circulate to their planet. Thus, the people's life can be saved and they would like to thank to seven stripes for saving them from criminals. We called them modern superhero six stripes.
Finally, the Black Crow give up and continue circulate to their planet. Thus, the people's life can be saved and they would like to thank to seven stripes for saving them from criminals. We called them modern superhero six stripes.


5 comments:
we cannot understand the story line because it is quite complicated. the story does not match with the introduction.. to much of characters in the story. but we really like the lecturer part when allien trying to disturb her. it was so cute and creative. good job for all of u :))
our comment:story line is quite interesting and funny but there is a few grammar mistakes.
examples :
1.he can solve the problem only (1 minutes)*
* 1 minute
2.to save the (people of life)*
* people's life
3.to ensure that people can (walking)* around
* walk
4.he (love)* to laugh like vampire
* loves
moral of the story: the unification of the superheroes for the peace of other people.
story line is very complicated and hard to understand. your story is too long and keep it up..!!!!
Remind: Make it short and interested that can give some to us...the reader..!!!!
the story is to complicated..you think so far out of the box..at some part we can't understand what you try to tell about..but we like the moral value try to save earth from black crow..
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